Template:Did you know nominations/Jenna Winebrenner

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 01:42, 9 April 2024 (UTC)

Jenna Winebrenner

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Jenna Winebrenner

... that a men's soccer team hired Jenna Winebrenner (pictured) to analyze game film and practice with the squad? Source: KC Star: "Part of her role involves analyzing video of opponents and providing the Comets certain data-points"; Platte County Citizen: "Winebrenner now has multiple duties with the Comets, including stepping in during practices and competing with the players"; MASL: "'I do some video work and analytics on game film ... Then I'm able to get out on the pitch and compete against them during practice'"
- Reviewed: Bates, Fleming from NZ multinom

Created by Hameltion (talk). Self-nominated at 22:07, 14 March 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Jenna Winebrenner; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems: - The hook uses "team" twice; the latter could be switched to "practice with the squad". Perhaps "men's soccer team" should be linked to the Comets page.

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Just need some work on the hook. Sounder Bruce 00:00, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

Thanks, @SounderBruce. Changed "team" to "squad", does that do it? To keep focus on the subject, I'd prefer just the one bold link in the hook, but it could be added. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 02:10, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

My comment got cut off (adjusting to a new keyboard and all); I do think it would help readers to have a link to the team, especially since MASL is rather unfamiliar. Sounder Bruce 04:05, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

@SounderBruce: Fair enough, added link. Hameltion (talk | contribs) 04:25, 15 March 2024 (UTC)

Good to go. Sounder Bruce 04:30, 15 March 2024 (UTC)