Template:Did you know nominations/Jennie Jackson

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:17, 17 February 2019 (UTC)

Jennie Jackson

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Jennie Jackson
Jennie Jackson

Created by Penny Richards (talk). Nominated by Yoninah (talk) at 11:54, 15 February 2019 (UTC).

Interesting woman, on good sources, offline source accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. You may want to expand the lead a bit, and perhaps say something about what "other music" means. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:06, 15 February 2019 (UTC)
I suggest you say "performed" instead of "sang" in the hook, in order to avoid "Singers, sang". --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:07, 15 February 2019 (UTC)
Thanks for the review. I took your suggestions for the article lead and the hook. Yoninah (talk) 19:30, 16 February 2019 (UTC)