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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 21:25, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

Joe Danger: The Movie

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Created/expanded by Fox. Nominated by Odie5533 (talk) at 22:54, 15 October 2011 (UTC)

  • Uh, not to be rude, but X201 did not write this article, I did. He did give some input, so perhaps a co-author. — Joseph Fox 17:11, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
  • I am very sorry. I did not pay close attention to the actual differences in the history. I have changed the nomination here to you as the sole creator, as X201's contributions, while useful, are more cleanup-based such as categorization. I'm glad you were watching the page so that you saw my addition of the DYK to the talk, and I do apologize for not looking closer at your contributions. --Odie5533 (talk) 17:47, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
  • That's perfectly fine mate. :) — Joseph Fox 09:43, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
  • Length is ok, article is reasonably well sourced and new, but I'm afraid I don't care for the hook at all. There is nothing unusual about a video game being based in a different locale than the studio that produced it. What about something like this:
... that the upcoming release Joe Danger: The Movie is actually a video game that lampoons various Hollywood films?
Beeblebrox (talk) 18:23, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
  • Your hook sounds much better. --Odie5533 (talk) 19:42, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
seems like we're good to go with new hook. Beeblebrox (talk) 19:21, 23 October 2011 (UTC)
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