Template:Did you know nominations/John Dominis Holt, IV
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The result was: promoted by Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 12:26, 10 January 2017 (UTC)
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John Dominis Holt, IV
edit- ... that writer John Dominis Holt inspired the Hawaiian Renaissance cultural revival with his essay "On Being Hawaiian"?
- Reviewed: Don Martina
- Comment: I've created an article on his grandfather with the same name but I don't want to combine the two hooks. Please promote on separate days.
Created by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 13:07, 16 November 2016 (UTC).
The first thing I noticed was that there was something wrong with the dates given, but I sorted that out. However, the sentence that supports the hook - "In 1964, his essay "On Being Hawaiian" inspired the rise of the Second Hawaiian Renaissance movement." - does not have an inline citation. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:30, 10 December 2016 (UTC)
- @Cwmhiraeth: Added citation.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 18:20, 10 December 2016 (UTC)
This article is new enough and long enough. The hook fact now has an inline citation, the article is neutral and I detected no policy issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:45, 10 December 2016 (UTC)
