- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Feminist (talk) 03:28, 5 March 2020 (UTC)
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Judith Liberman
... that the career of French storyteller Judith Liberman was shaped during her childhood in a commune?Source: "Judith has had a colorful life growing up in a weaving community that spent nights storytelling and sharing songs by a fire. Judith began learning the art of storytelling from the age of 14. She went on to study theater in Pomona, California, storytelling at the conservatory of Paris and ..." {"... has even given a TEDx talk in 2013 on storytelling and the enchanted world. She has also since moved to Istanbul where she has monthly storytelling performances and a weekly radio show and ..." [1]
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Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 09:36, 19 February 2020 (UTC).
- At 2700 bytes, this is long enough. It was new enough when nominated. Article is policy-compliant with no evidence of copyvio (with most sources in Turkish, where I have to AGF). Some more copyediting may also be helpful. The hook is cited to a source that is now 404 but available on Wayback Machine. The source doesn't really say that this shaped her career, so I think the suggestion is a bit WP:SYNTH. While she did grow up in a storytelling commune, she also studied storytelling later, so that may have also have "shaped her career" just as much. CeeGee, do you think you can work on the hook a bit more?
—Kusma (t·c) 17:13, 25 February 2020 (UTC)
- At 2700 bytes, this is long enough. It was new enough when nominated. Article is policy-compliant with no evidence of copyvio (with most sources in Turkish, where I have to AGF). Some more copyediting may also be helpful. The hook is cited to a source that is now 404 but available on Wayback Machine. The source doesn't really say that this shaped her career, so I think the suggestion is a bit WP:SYNTH. While she did grow up in a storytelling commune, she also studied storytelling later, so that may have also have "shaped her career" just as much. CeeGee, do you think you can work on the hook a bit more?
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... that Judith Liberman grew up in a commune, where stories were told, studied storytelling, and became a professional in this genre?CeeGee 08:53, 26 February 2020 (UTC) - @Kusma: Please check ALT1. I restored the dead-link ref with archive-link as well.CeeGee 08:53, 26 February 2020 (UTC)
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- Hi, I came by to promote this, but both hooks are rather dull. What do you think about this:
- ALT2: ... that Judith Liberman learned storytelling in a French commune at age 14 and went on to reintroduce the telling of Anatolian fairy tales in Turkey? Yoninah (talk) 19:05, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
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