- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 talk 13:17, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
Julie Cliff
- ... that Julie Cliff revealed that an outbreak of konzo among poor in Mozambique was caused by cyanide in insufficiently processed cassava? Source: [1] [2]
Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Whispyhistory (talk) at 16:04, 7 November 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Julie Cliff; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- Beginning review. DrThneed (talk) 07:26, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
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Article is new enough and long enough, and well-sourced. Earwig scores quite high but it is picking up names of institutions, positions, awards, etc so not a concern. My only issue is I think your hook could be tweaked - poor what? Poor people? poor communities? Poor women and children? Other than that, it all looks good to me.
(Sorry, came back to add - not an issue for DYK, but the outline diagram in the article is a little odd at first glance, and would benefit from a caption describing what it is showing? There is some text in the image description on Commons that could be used). DrThneed (talk) 07:55, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- Thank you @DrThneed:.... left image out and trimmed hook. Is this okay please?
- ALT1... that Julie Cliff revealed that an outbreak of konzo in Mozambique was caused by cyanide in insufficiently processed cassava?
- Yes, that's fine! Thanks Whispyhistory. DrThneed (talk) 09:39, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
Article is new enough and long enough, and well-sourced. Earwig scores quite high but it is picking up names of institutions, positions, awards, etc so not a concern. My only issue is I think your hook could be tweaked - poor what? Poor people? poor communities? Poor women and children? Other than that, it all looks good to me.
(Sorry, came back to add - not an issue for DYK, but the outline diagram in the article is a little odd at first glance, and would benefit from a caption describing what it is showing? There is some text in the image description on Commons that could be used). DrThneed (talk) 07:55, 9 November 2023 (UTC)