- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Bilorv (talk) 09:19, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
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June Fernández
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June Fernández
- ... that June Fernández (pictured) wrote "I Wanted Sex But Not Like That"? Source: "...her report " I wanted sex but not like that " published in the digital magazine Pikara Magazine and in eldiario.es, has won the II Prize for Journalism Colombine”
- ALT1:... that many don't write about when a "desired encounter turns into a sexual assault", but June Fernández (pictured) did? Source: "What was to be a desired encounter turns into a sexual assault. This situation ..."
- ALT2: ... that when June Fernández wrote her award winning article on intersexuality she included interviews with Mauro Cabral Grinspan and Gabriel J. Martín?
Created by Victuallers (talk) and Throughthemind. Self-nominated at 12:23, 1 June 2021 (UTC).
Interesting life and work, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. The image is licensed and welcome. - I liked the original hook best, but believe you will have to change to title case, as it wasn't something from her memories, but an article. Will you? - In the article, I think the quote about the Melon title needs quotation marks, or the ... make no sense. I am not sure what "Fernandez wrote frequently contributing opinion pieces" means. Can "she was on the magazine's coordination team consisting of herself" be worded without that "herself"? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:58, 25 June 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you Gerda Arendt for your thoughtful review. Title case is an improvement, I think, as it makes it more hooky. I've added quotes to the Melon title comment and removed "herself". Thanks again for the advice. Do feel free to make more changes. Cheers Victuallers (talk) 18:29, 25 June 2021 (UTC)
thank you! Sources in foreign languages (most that is) accepted AGF. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:38, 25 June 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you Gerda Arendt for your thoughtful review. Title case is an improvement, I think, as it makes it more hooky. I've added quotes to the Melon title comment and removed "herself". Thanks again for the advice. Do feel free to make more changes. Cheers Victuallers (talk) 18:29, 25 June 2021 (UTC)
