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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Pi (talk) 18:25, 12 August 2020 (UTC)

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Käte Frankenthal

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Created by Slugger O'Toole (talk). Nominated by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) at 02:29, 23 June 2020 (UTC).

  • Date of creation and length both check out fine. The hook fact is interesting, and appropriately cited inline. Checks on ref #1, which is heavily used in the article reveal a few concerning similarities though: [1] Harrias talk 07:56, 25 June 2020 (UTC)
Harrias, That source was very heavily used, but I tried not to paraphrase too closely. Could you point out one or two examples and I'll seek to rectify them? Thanks! And thanks also to Harrias for the nomination! --01:09, 27 June 2020 (UTC)
Harrias, Could you be a little more specific, please, and I'd be glad to fix them. --Slugger O'Toole (talk) 17:21, 9 July 2020 (UTC)
Slugger O'Toole It's all in the link provided in my original comment. Harrias talk 17:29, 9 July 2020 (UTC)
Harrias, Sorry about that. Not sure how I missed it. I have made some changes. A lot of the similarities are things that can't be avoided (e.g. "The United States," the title of her memoir, "Socialist Workers Party," etc.). Others are just two or three words that I don't think are too closely paraphrasing (e.g. "Hitler came to power," " the municipal physician," etc). Thanks for looking at it. --Slugger O'Toole (talk) 14:16, 11 July 2020 (UTC)
  • Actually, it's a very long article with a very short lead. Slugger O'Toole, could you expand the lead to summarize the key points of the presentation? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 19:28, 27 July 2020 (UTC)
  • The nominator has not edited on Wikipedia since July 19. If someone else wants to expand the lead, we can finish this nomination. Otherwise, I'll mark it for closure as unsuccessful. Yoninah (talk) 00:07, 9 August 2020 (UTC)
@Yoninah: I've expanded the lead. The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 00:46, 9 August 2020 (UTC)
  • Terrific, thanks! @Harrias: could you complete your review please? Yoninah (talk) 00:50, 9 August 2020 (UTC)
  • The paraphrasing concerns have been resolved, and I'm happy this meets the DYK criteria, as outlined above. Harrias talk 15:04, 12 August 2020 (UTC)
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