Template:Did you know nominations/Kolejka (game)

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 06:31, 20 December 2014 (UTC)

Kolejka (game)

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... that Kolejka, one of the most popular Polish board games, is designed to educate people about the realities of the communist shortage economy?

Reviewed: The 4 Percent Universe

5x expanded by Piotrus (talk). Self nominated at 09:45, 11 December 2014 (UTC).

Prose expanded five times, nominated within 7 days, has over 1500 characters, appears neutral, has multiple RSs and citations, no apparent copyvios, etc. No problems with the hook: interesting, decently neutral, and cited. QPQ is good; image N/A. Looks good.--ɱ (talk · vbm) 20:48, 11 December 2014 (UTC)

@User:Ɱ: Thank you for a quick review. I was wondering whether ALT1 hook would be more fun, see below. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 04:55, 12 December 2014 (UTC)

ALT1: * ... that Kolejka, a popular Polish educational board game about shortages in the communist shortage economy, has suffered from shortages itself?

Also looks good. I wish there was an easy way to indicate that the game's shortage was in availability, but I can't think of a good concise way. It's not very necessary; ALT1 works fine as it is.--ɱ (talk · vbm) 05:11, 12 December 2014 (UTC)

ALT2: ... that Kolejka, a popular Polish educational board game about shortages in the communist shortage economy, has itself been in short supply?

Suggested ALT2 above.Georgejdorner (talk) 15:47, 14 December 2014 (UTC)

That's better, thanks. Alt 2 approved.--ɱ (talk · vbm) 18:21, 14 December 2014 (UTC)