Template:Did you know nominations/Komm, Herr, segne uns

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:38, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

Komm, Herr, segne uns

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... that Dieter Trautwein wrote text and music for the hymn "Komm, Herr, segne uns" (Come, Lord, bless us) in 1978, and also used the title also for his 2003 autobiography? Source: several

Reviewed: ~~to come~~

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 21:13, 19 September 2021 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing: - While WP:LEADCITE would normally exempt you from sourcing in the lead, the fact that some of the lead material isn't mentioned in the article means you probably should do so.
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: - Not done
Overall: Holding approval awaiting sourcing and a QPQ. ALT0a proposed. nice work! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 02:12, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

ALT0a: ... that Dieter Trautwein's hymn "Komm, Herr, segne uns" (Come, Lord, bless us) was also the title for his autobiography?

Thank you for review and offer. I have some things more urgent to do (had no internet for 3 hours ...), so just short: it's rather unusual for hymns that the same person writes text and music, so I think it should be mentioned. It gives them a special quality. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:06, 23 September 2021 (UTC)

I reviewed now Template:Did you know nominations/Space Encounters.

ALT0b: ... that Dieter Trautwein gave his 2003 autobiography the same title as his song "Komm, Herr, segne uns" (Come, Lord, bless us) for which he had created text and music in 1978? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:48, 24 September 2021 (UTC)

Lead: all that is uncited is the two lines of the beginning, because some refs use that as a title, certainly less ambiguous. You can see that in the several references that quote the text. Both translations are my own. - Or did I misunderstand? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:52, 24 September 2021 (UTC)

Oh, I see what you mean about the text. I'm not sure if translation that way is technically WP:OR, but my guess would be probably not. QPQ is provided, article is cited, we are good to go! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (they/them) 21:40, 26 September 2021 (UTC)

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