- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 01:12, 28 June 2018 (UTC)
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Lena Erdil
edit- ... that the international successful Turkish windsurfer Lena Erdil is the daughter of a Turkish father and a German mother, who had met eachother while windsurfing?
Source: "Annesi Alman. Babası Karşıyakalı." (in Turkish) [1], "... anne ve babasının tanışma sebebi bile rüzgar sörfü!" (in Turkish) [2]
- ALT1:... that the international successful Turkish windsurfer Lena Erdil is nicknamed the Daughter of the Wind in her country?
Source: "'Rüzgarın Kızı' Lena Erdil, ..." (in Turkish) [3], "’Rüzgarın Kızı’ olarak anılan... sörfçü ... Lena Aylin Erdil ..." (in Turkish) [4]
- Reviewed: Telfair Hodgson Jr.
5x expanded by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 18:47, 24 June 2018 (UTC).
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Hook eligibility:
- Cited:
- Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith - Interesting:
- Other problems:
- The prose here needs some tweaking-- should be "internationally successful" instead of "international successful". In the main hook, "eachother" should be separated into two words.
| QPQ: Done. |
Overall: 
Just a couple of minor fixes per above, really interesting subject and great hooks! Nomader (talk) 20:27, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that the internationally successful Turkish windsurfer Lena Erdil is the daughter of a Turkish father and a German mother, who had met each other while windsurfing?
