Template:Did you know nominations/Leyla Express and Johnny Express incidents

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The result was: promoted by Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:49, 14 June 2018 (UTC)

Leyla Express and Johnny Express incidents

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  • Reviewed: Parkala Massacre
  • Comment: Somewhat complex topic, further hook suggestions are welcome.

Moved to mainspace by Vanamonde93 (talk). Self-nominated at 06:45, 29 May 2018 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article is new enough, long enough, well-sourced, and neutral. A spot check of the sources reveals no evidence of plagiarism. I prefer the first hook, because that's what drew me into the article (and after this, I'm off to sign up to review it for GA), which is of an appropriate length and cited in the article by several sources, both on and offline. The second hook should read "1971" instead of "1970", but is otherwise cited, although somewhat less interesting in my opinion. QPQ done, so this one should be good to go. Canadian Paul 16:47, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

  • Thanks for the review, and for the offer of a GA review. I've fixed the typo. Regards, Vanamonde (talk) 17:00, 30 May 2018 (UTC)