- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Seven Pandas (talk) 14:41, 25 July 2020 (UTC)
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Lisa Kearney
- ... that the judoka Lisa Kearney won Northern Ireland's first medal at the 2014 Commonwealth Games? Source: BBC
- ALT1:... that Northern Irish Lisa Kearney was the first judoka representing Ireland to reach the final of a Judo World Cup? Source: RTE
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5x expanded by The C of E (talk). Self-nominated at 06:36, 5 July 2020 (UTC).
- Article is new enough (readable prose expanded 5x), long enough, within the policies (no BLP issue, citations are ok, no copyvio per Earwig). There look to be imperfections in the prose, e.g. the first sentence: "... is a retired Northern Irish judoka, competing in the −48 kg category". PS. If the article is written in a particular variety of English (other than American English), it can be indicated in its talk page (e.g. using {{Use British English}}). The hooks are short enough, wikilinking 2014 Commonwealth Games may improve it. ALT1 may look slightly more hookish, I think it can be shortened to:
- ALT2:... that Lisa Kearney was the first Northern Irish judoka to reach the final of a Judo World Cup? Source: RTE
- --Z 12:51, 8 July 2020 (UTC)
- @ZxxZxxZ: Fine with me. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 06:56, 10 July 2020 (UTC)
ALT2 ready to go --Z 16:09, 10 July 2020 (UTC)
- Article is new enough (readable prose expanded 5x), long enough, within the policies (no BLP issue, citations are ok, no copyvio per Earwig). There look to be imperfections in the prose, e.g. the first sentence: "... is a retired Northern Irish judoka, competing in the −48 kg category". PS. If the article is written in a particular variety of English (other than American English), it can be indicated in its talk page (e.g. using {{Use British English}}). The hooks are short enough, wikilinking 2014 Commonwealth Games may improve it. ALT1 may look slightly more hookish, I think it can be shortened to: