Template:Did you know nominations/List of colleges and universities in Iowa
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 11:48, 23 September 2012 (UTC)
List of colleges and universities in Iowa
edit- ... that Loras College is Iowa's oldest post-secondary institution, as it was founded in 1839, seven years before Iowa became a U.S. state?
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- Comment: ALT1 ... that with a founding date of 1839, Loras College is Iowa's oldest post-secondary institution?
Created/expanded by Ruby2010 (talk). Self nom at 02:23, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- ALT2 ... that there are two research universities, nine master's universities, and nineteen baccalaureate colleges in the U.S. state of Iowa?
Article expansion and condition are good. ALT1 and 2 are fine; the first hook seems to me to imply a degree of causation that's not quite right; suggest: ... that Loras College, Iowa's oldest post-secondary institution, was founded in 1839, seven years before Iowa became a U.S. state?" instead. Aside from that we're just waiting on a QPQ review. GRAPPLE X 02:43, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! I've added my QPQ above and the new ALT below. Ruby 2010/2013 03:24, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- ALT3 ... that Loras College, Iowa's oldest post-secondary institution, was founded in 1839, seven years before Iowa became a U.S. state?
