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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:12, 15 September 2015 (UTC)

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*ALT1 ... that actress Lo Kauppi (pictured) played the character Johanna Lager a gun expert in the film False Trail oppositS actors Peter Stormare and Rolf Lassgård?

    • ALT2 ... that actress Lo Kauppi (pictured) while studying to become a hairdresser in her early 20s in London became addicted to drugs?
      • ALT3 ... that actress Lo Kauppi (pictured) was a singer and guitar player in the feminist punk band Vagina Grande?

Created by BabbaQ (talk). At 21:31, 28 August 2015 (UTC).

  • Too short at the moment; needs citations for her place of birth and her training as a hairdresser; and the hook is bit boring ("actress studied acting"). Belle (talk) 00:12, 29 August 2015 (UTC)
  • Belle. Expanded article, added citations, and added a few ALT hooks. Take a look.BabbaQ (talk) 10:10, 29 August 2015 (UTC)
Long enough; new enough, neutral; no text crimes, though the reference cited for her directorial debut doesn't mention it (as it was written 3 years earlier) this and this might be better. QPQ done. Pic fine and free to use; ALT1 is still a bit "actress acts" and ALT2 is too negative. What about:
ALT4 (formerly ALT3) ... that Lo Kauppi (pictured) trained as a hairdresser in London before becoming an actress?
Not much more exciting admittedly ("actress does other stuff before becoming actress", and you could get a much more interesting hook if you expanded on her writing and autobiographical show. You need a another reviewer to sign it off if you use that. Belle (talk) 23:43, 29 August 2015 (UTC)
I have fixed the issues. In my personal opinion ALT3 is ok and so is the other hooks. I leave it up to the new reviewer to make the decision on which hook will be used.BabbaQ (talk) 08:32, 30 August 2015 (UTC)
Calling for another reviewer to approve the hook. Belle (talk) 10:14, 3 September 2015 (UTC)
Get something about Vagina Grande in there and I'll support it. That's a lot more interesting than hairdressing and drug addictions. Here are two suggestions for sources:
Peter Isotalo 12:29, 4 September 2015 (UTC)
  • Vagina Grande added.BabbaQ (talk) 13:31, 4 September 2015 (UTC)
  • Sweet. I'm not a regular DYK reviewer, but it has my support. Peter Isotalo 13:42, 4 September 2015 (UTC)
  • ALT3 rated "sweet" by Peter Isotalo and cited. Good to go per the rest of my review. Belle (talk) 01:12, 7 September 2015 (UTC)
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