Template:Did you know nominations/Lubang Jeriji Saléh

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:12, 14 December 2018 (UTC)

Lubang Jeriji Saléh

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Bull painting at Lubang Jeriji Saléh

• ... that Lubang Jeriji Saléh cave is believed to contain the oldest figurative art (pictured) in the world?
  • ALT1:... that a cave in Indonesian Borneo is believed to contain the oldest figurative art (pictured) in the world?

• Comment: evidence for hooks can be found here [1]
• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Louis Brooks (rodeo cowboy)

Created by PotentPotables (talk) and Drbogdan (talk). Nominated by PotentPotables (talk) at 02:24, 9 November 2018 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: @PotentPotables: Looks good with almost all aspects, though, one of the sentences caught me as weird:
"A team, led by Maxime Aubert from Griffith University and Pindi Setiawan from the Bandung Institute of Technology, had previously investigated cave paintings in the neighbouring island of Sulawesi."
This sentence should also explain that these guys are investigating this particular painting - as it currently is, the team doesn't relate to the topic. The last sentence should probably mention "geographical origins of art" instead of just "origins of art". There are some Indonesian pedanticness I'd add, but I couldn't find any information just yet. Juxlos (talk) 21:45, 12 November 2018 (UTC)

• Also, I think the image would work quite well for DYK. Juxlos (talk) 21:45, 12 November 2018 (UTC)

@Juxlos: I've sorted out those two sentences, so hopefully it works better now. I'm not entirely sure how to change it so the picture is added to the nomination, but I agree it would work well, and hope you can help with that PotentPotables ( talk ) 23:04, 12 November 2018 (UTC)

@PotentPotables: There. I believe that it is a PD image, and so all is clear. Juxlos (talk) 23:16, 12 November 2018 (UTC)