- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 21:12, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
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María Parrado
edit- ... that María Parrado is the winner of the first season of The Voice Kids Spain?
- ALT1:... that María Parrado won the first season of The Voice Kids Spain?
- ALT2:... that María Parrado was the winner of the first season of La Voz Kids, the Spanish children's version of The Voice?
- ALT3:... that María Parrado is the winner of the first season of the Spanish version of the talent show The Voice Kids?
Created/expanded by Moscow Connection (talk). Self-nominated at 01:18, 17 March 2017 (UTC).
This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are linked to the Spanish language Wikipedia article but we really need a citation to a secondary source for the hook facts at the end of the sentence that mentions them. The hooks are all much of a muchness and the promoter can decide which to use. The article is neutral and the Spanish language sourcing prevented me from assessing whether there are any policy issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:48, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
- The references number 1, 2, 3, 4 are secondary sources (BuenaMusica.com, Chance, Elepé, La Voz de Galicia). (Only the reference number 5 is from Telecinco, the broadcaster of the TV show, if that's what you mean.)
I can add some more references, to some bigger newspapers or something, if you want. --Moscow Connection (talk) 15:25, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
- Those sources will be fine, but the relevant rule states "Each fact in the hook must be supported in the article by at least one inline citation to a reliable source, appearing no later than the end of the sentence(s) offering that fact. Citations at the end of the paragraph are not sufficient." So you need to rewrite the paragraph so that it consists of a single sentence, or add additional citations to conform with this rule. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:49, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
- Do you mean I need to add a source for the "Spanish children's version of The Voice" part? Okay, I will do it. --Moscow Connection (talk) 18:53, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
- Sources for ALT2:
I've just added three sources [1] for the fact that La Voz Kids is "the Spanish children's version of The Voice".
Sources for ALT0, ALT1, ALT3:
Reference number 1 (this one, BuenaMusica.com) says she won La Voz Kids España, which means "The Voice Kids Spain". --Moscow Connection (talk) 02:44, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
- Those sources will be fine, but the relevant rule states "Each fact in the hook must be supported in the article by at least one inline citation to a reliable source, appearing no later than the end of the sentence(s) offering that fact. Citations at the end of the paragraph are not sufficient." So you need to rewrite the paragraph so that it consists of a single sentence, or add additional citations to conform with this rule. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:49, 24 March 2017 (UTC)
- The references number 1, 2, 3, 4 are secondary sources (BuenaMusica.com, Chance, Elepé, La Voz de Galicia). (Only the reference number 5 is from Telecinco, the broadcaster of the TV show, if that's what you mean.)
That should be fine. All hooks approved. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:25, 25 March 2017 (UTC)
