Template:Did you know nominations/Marcus Bosch

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:09, 22 August 2017 (UTC)

Marcus Bosch

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Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 09:55, 21 July 2017 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: This is my first review, so any feedback is welcomed. Cheers, FriyMan Per aspera ad astra 16:29, 21 July 2017 (UTC)

Thank you for looking closely! Please delete all internal comments about doing a review: no need to carry them along, but leave the bottom line comment ;) - Sorry that I missed the para when finding refs for what the German Wikipedia says. I added a ref for Osnabrück (external link so far), and duplicated one for the other three places. I dropped Dortmund, could find a source only for one concert there. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:20, 21 July 2017 (UTC)
@FriyMan and Gerda Arendt: Approving this nomination since the problem has been addressed, and it's been a month since the last comment. Here are some non-DYK suggestions:
  1. Explain what Generalmusikdirektor means; it seems fairly intuitive, but there's a reason the link redirects to the appropriate English term.
  2. "He was acclaimed for his recording of Bruckner's complete symphonies, among others." Among other symphonies? Or among other recordings?
  3. "He took the Kapellmeister career . . ." No idea what that means.
  4. "He conducted as a guest orchestras . . ." Do you mean as a guest conductor, or at guest orchestras, or something else?
  5. "From 2010, he has directed the opera festival Opernfestspiele Heidenheim (de) in his hometown." Is that a yearly thing?
  6. Several lines are missing in the far right column of the table. --Usernameunique (talk) 00:39, 22 August 2017 (UTC)