Template:Did you know nominations/Margaret Amoakohene

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The result was: promoted by Alex Shih ^Talk 03:55, 23 July 2017 (UTC)

Margaret Amoakohene

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... that Margaret Ivy, a former High Commissioner to Canada, is now a member of the Council of State? Source: see this
- ALT1:~~... that Margaret Ivy is one of only twenty five people who sit on the Council of State of Ghana?~~Source: this
  - ALT2:... that Margaret Ivy has served in both New Patriotic administrations of Ghana as a High commissioner and a Council of State member?
    - ALT3:~~... that Margaret Ivy after graduating with degrees in French and Spanish, spent a significant part of her working life in teaching and practicing mass communications?~~
      - ALT4:~~... that Margaret Ivy enrolled at St. Francis then St. Louis schools before the University of Ghana?~~

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Science Express

Created by Crosstemplejay (talk). Self-nominated at 13:28, 20 June 2017 (UTC).

New enough, long enough, within policy to a reasonable degree, copyvio unlikely, but could there be a more interesting hook or at least a second alternative hook? QBQ not done either. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:31, 13 July 2017 (UTC)

@Yellow Evan: ALT dully suggested. CrossTemple Jay 16:00, 13 July 2017 (UTC)

Ok. Good to go now (not striking ALT0, I'll let the closure decide on what hook, approved both). Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 16:04, 13 July 2017 (UTC)

This is pretty much the same hook as Template:Did you know nominations/Stanley Nii Adjiri Blankson. And no one knows you're talking about Ghana. Could you provide a hookier ALT please? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 23:37, 15 July 2017 (UTC)

@Yoninah: *Changes made, more hooks suggested. Please review and offer your comment. Thanks.CrossTemple Jay 14:12, 16 July 2017 (UTC)

@Crosstemplejay: It's very hard to come up with a hook for a politician article when all you're writing about is their education and appointments. It's best to find some colorful biographical facts to add to the article so you can use those for a hook. ALT2 is coming close to a hook, but the part about each administration being in the New Patriotic Party doesn't appear in the article. If you would add and source that, we could use ALT2. We could also go with your original hook, although I would reverse the order:
ALT0a: ... that Margaret Ivy, currently a member of Ghana's Council of State, is the country's former High Commissioner to Canada?
Striking other hooks. Yoninah (talk) 21:42, 18 July 2017 (UTC)

@Yellow Evan: Would you be able to approve ALT0a? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:51, 21 July 2017 (UTC)

Based on this, sure, which seems to be a very interesting newspaper, BTW. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 15:35, 21 July 2017 (UTC)