- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 14:14, 6 April 2015 (UTC)
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Margery Blackie
edit- ... that when Dr Margery Blackie treated the The Queen at Buckingham Palace she brought arsenic, death cap mushroom, and Gila monster venom?
- Reviewed: tba
Created by Edwardx (talk). Self-nominated at 23:07, 4 April 2015 (UTC).
: Confirmed 5x expansion to 2825 characters, fact referenced (I'd quibble about The People as a source but it technically qualifies). I so think the hook could be snappier; it doesn't need to mention the palace and the queen, so perhaps either of:
- ALT1: ... that when Dr Margery Blackie treated the The Queen she brought arsenic, death cap mushroom, and Gila monster venom?
- ALT2: ... that Dr Margery Blackie brought arsenic, death cap mushroom, and Gila monster venom to Buckingham Palace?
- However, if no one else has an opinion, the primary hook is OK and good to go. - AdamBMorgan (talk) 20:50, 5 April 2015 (UTC)
