Template:Did you know nominations/Mark Sutton

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 17:59, 24 September 2013 (UTC)

Mark Sutton

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... that Mark Sutton was killed after wingsuit flying at over 150 mph (240 km/h)?

Reviewed: The Flesh and Blood Show

Created by Inwind (talk), Matty.007 (talk). Nominated by Matty.007 (talk) at 08:52, 17 August 2013 (UTC).

Although the article is good for its state right now, I'd recommend an alternate hook relating to his Olympics involvement (i.e. ALT1: ... that Mark Sutton played James Bond jumping out of a helicopter at the Olympics? ) ViperSnake151 Talk 01:10, 18 August 2013 (UTC)

On grounds of sensitivity? I have a slight tweak to Alt wording: Alt 1a: ... that Mark Sutton played James Bond jumping out a helicopter at the 2012 opening ceremony of the greatest show on Earth? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Matty.007 (talk • contribs)

Or maybe...

ALT #2: ... that Mark Sutton portrayed a skydiving James Bond during the opening ceremony of the 2012 Summer Olympics? ViperSnake151 Talk 16:06, 29 August 2013 (UTC)

Alt 2 fine with me, but that means we need another reviewer.

Mat ty.007 16:27, 29 August 2013 (UTC)

I have reviewed the whole article independently, and made some copy edits. The ALT#2 hook is fine, except that it needed a cite after the hook, which I have now added. Good to go now. --NSH001 (talk) 11:08, 24 September 2013 (UTC)