- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Victuallers (talk) 15:16, 31 August 2015 (UTC)
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Mary Isenhour
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Pennsylvania Gov. Tom Wolf
- ... that Mary Isenhour has helped U.S. Senator Bob Casey Jr. and Pennsylvania Governors Ed Rendell and Tom Wolf (pictured) all win their elections?
- Reviewed: Tanaka Yoshio
Moved to mainspace by Hunter Kahn (talk). Self-nominated at 18:14, 3 August 2015 (UTC).
The article was created two days before the nomination, lenght is good, QPQ done and meets other criteria as well. 
I think the hook could be more precise ("helped win elections in what way? who is she?"), but otherwise it's good to go. --Pudeo' 20:02, 3 August 2015 (UTC)
- We could clarify by adding something like "helped with the campaigns of" or something like that. But I sort of like the way it is now, because I think the little bit of ambiguity will urge more people to click on the link. I don't feel incredibly strongly about this though... — Hunter Kahn 01:57, 5 August 2015 (UTC)
Pudeo, here's the copyedited hook you want:
- ALT1:... that Mary Isenhour contributed to campaigns of U.S. Senator Bob Casey Jr. and Pennsylvania Governors Ed Rendell and Tom Wolf (pictured), who all won their elections?