- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 14:18, 25 October 2020 (UTC)
Masey McLain
5x expanded by JGHowes (talk). Self-nominated at 18:56, 10 October 2020 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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Overall:
ALT0 and ALT1 both check out with the same citation. This nomination looks OK to me, except that it doesn't read as neutral, since the reviews are mixed up with the film facts. I strongly suggest that you create a separate Reviews section, and put all the reviews (excluding her own comments) in that new section. If we can sort this out, then I believe that this nominmation should be OK. Storye book (talk) 20:35, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review and suggestion. I pride myself on strict adherence to npov, so your point is well-taken.
and I'll work on that tonite. @Storye book: it's now re-organized accordingly. JGHowes talk_
Thank you for your article edits - that solves the neutrality problem really well. I should add that I am happy with both hooks. Good to go.