Template:Did you know nominations/Mats Møller Dæhli
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 11:02, 18 March 2013 (UTC).
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Mats Møller Dæhli
edit- ... that Mats Møller Dæhli made his debut for the Norway national under-21 football team at the age of 17?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Female academic pioneers from the 19th century (1st of 7 QPQ's)
5x expanded by Mentoz86 (talk). Self nominated at 21:15, 13 March 2013 (UTC).
- ALT1 ... that Mats Møller Dæhli won Manchester United's "Young Player of the Year" award in 2012?
New enough expansion. Long enough. Neutral, cites sources and no evident copyvio. BLP tagging in order. Both hooks are short enough and correctly formatted, accurate, cited (Norwegian is my native language, so no need for AGF) and neutral. As for interestingness, both suffice, but I think ALT1 is far better than the original hook. QPQ good and no image involved. All good. Manxruler (talk) 12:31, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
- Although the article is overall neutral enough, I would personally replace the words "... at the end of an impressive maiden season for Manchester United." with "... at the end of his maiden season for Manchester United." I'd leave it up to the readers to evaluate the impressiveness of the season. Manxruler (talk) 16:14, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
