Template:Did you know nominations/Michael Pineda

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 21:18, 2 February 2012 (UTC)

Michael Pineda

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... that Michael Pineda (pictured) averaged 94.7 miles per hour (152.4 km/h) with his fastball in 2011, leading Major League Baseball rookies with at least 100 innings pitched?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hotel Nacional
ALT1: that Michael Pineda's (pictured) fastball averaged 94.7 miles per hour (152.4 km/h) in 2011, leading Major League Baseball rookies with at least 100 innings pitched?

Comment to reviewer: This is the first revision to start with. – Muboshgu (talk) 08:53, 15 January 2012 (UTC)

Created/expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self nom at 19:38, 14 January 2012 (UTC)

Expansion length good, citing also looks good without close paraphrasing. Free images; I prefer the first, but only on aesthetic grounds. Hook is fine. I recommend a good copyediting, which shouldn't affect appearance in DYK. I also suggest expanding the lead a little. Christine (talk) 20:43, 1 February 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I do plan to give the article a good copy edit and lead expansion as I nominate this for GA in due time. – Muboshgu (talk) 22:18, 1 February 2012 (UTC)