Template:Did you know nominations/Miguelina Acosta Cárdenas
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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 04:34, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
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Miguelina Acosta Cárdenas
Miguelina Acosta Cárdenas after her graduation in 1920
... that Miguelina Acosta Cárdenas (pictured) was the first woman to graduate in law in Peru?Source: https://elperuano.pe/noticia/76203-la-primera-abogada-peruana
- QPQ – less than 5
Created by Less Unless (talk). Self-nominated at 19:49, 6 August 2021 (UTC).
Interesting life, on fine sources, no copyvio obvious. Sorry, I don't like the hook. I don't care much about the "first woman" business (which is slightly sexist in a way), and we could say so much about what she did. I'll approve if you insist, but think that her character and aims in life are left out. - In the article, please note that the first time a subject is referred to in a section, it should be her name, not "she". We have readers who arrive there from the TOC. You are not obliged to do a review but could voluntarily do one ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:39, 10 August 2021 (UTC)- I forgot: The image is licensed, and shows the period well. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:43, 10 August 2021 (UTC)
- I agree, Gerda Arendt, what do you think about this one? "Was a feminist, educator and activist who promoted rights of women, workers and indigenous peoples in Peru in the early 20-th century?" Feel free to change it if you feel something else might be better. Best, Less Unless (talk) 19:32, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
- If I word it I can't review. The idea is good, but too general. Want to try something more specific? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:01, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
- I agree, Gerda Arendt, what do you think about this one? "Was a feminist, educator and activist who promoted rights of women, workers and indigenous peoples in Peru in the early 20-th century?" Feel free to change it if you feel something else might be better. Best, Less Unless (talk) 19:32, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Miguelina Acosta Cárdenas (pictured) played a key role in the fledgling women's movement in Peru in the early 20th century? Source: [1] Grimes2 (talk) 08:02, 12 August 2021 (UTC)
fine by me, and better than the original, - open for other suggestions --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:28, 12 August 2021 (UTC)
