Template:Did you know nominations/Moonlight Madness (video game)

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 23:18, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

Moonlight Madness (video game)

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... that one reviewer thought ZX Spectrum computer game Moonlight Madness should have been called Daylight Robbery due to its price?

Comment: All the sources were taken from the World of Spectrum archives and can be checked (see external link).

Created/expanded by Someone another (talk). Self nom at 11:37, 1 February 2012 (UTC)

The article is new and long enough (2,691 characters). It is neutral and cites the sources. The hook is not too long (115 characters). I haven't noticed any copyright violations. The hook is neutral and interesting.

I think (I apologize if I am wrong) that nominator has more than 5 dyk nominations so he is expected to review another article.
I think that hook is maybe not clear enough. I am not native English speaker but I did not fully understand what hook means until I read the article. Maybe it should be clarified by adding "because of its price"? --Antidiskriminator (talk) 12:33, 1 February 2012 (UTC)

I've updated the hook, thank you for the review. Apologies for giving no indication about reviewing a different hook - I was unaware of the requirement and will review one as soon as possible. Someone another 16:14, 1 February 2012 (UTC)

New hook has 127 characters, so it is not too long. OK after nominator reviews another nomination. Thank you Someone for this nomination. I enjoyed reviewing it.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 21:32, 1 February 2012 (UTC)