- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 14:03, 14 June 2014 (UTC)
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Moto E
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that Motorola claims that the Moto E is faster than the Samsung Galaxy S4?
- Reviewed: James Lowangcha Wanglat
Created by Strike Eagle (talk), Rsrikanth05 (talk), Frmorrison (talk), ViperSnake151 (talk). Nominated by Rsrikanth05 (talk) at 18:39, 14 May 2014 (UTC).
- ALT1:
... that Motorola intends the Moto E to "end the feature phone"?
- ALT2:
... that the release of the Moto E crashed an Indian online retailer?ViperSnake151 Talk 19:02, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
- ALT1:
- ALT2a: ... that the release of the Moto E caused the website of online retailer Flipkart to crash? --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 19:14, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
Everything checked. IMO the original fact will be more interesting to readers all over the world. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ Talk Email 13:54, 19 May 2014 (UTC)
I have undone the promotion by Hawkeye7 and reopened this DYK nomination, as discussed at Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Removed promo hook. Fram (talk) 09:50, 23 May 2014 (UTC)
- Due to the nature of the hook, and a subsequent chat with ViperSnake151, I added ALT2A. I don't know why Vibhijain chose to go with the original hook. --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 20:03, 23 May 2014 (UTC)
Complete review needed per DYKReviewing guide. "Everything checked." tells us absolutely nothing. Full details are needed before this can be promoted again. — Maile (talk) 00:17, 26 May 2014 (UTC)
Added a couple of inlines on direct quotes and the ALT2a hook text in the body. Length, cites, newness all good to go. Great article, but I'd love to get a picture in there. Maury Markowitz (talk) 12:17, 4 June 2014 (UTC)
- @Maury Markowitz I've added an image which I think is decently clear. Cheers, ƬheStrikeΣagle sorties 08:38, 6 June 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks SE, that does indeed spruce it up. Maury Markowitz (talk) 11:46, 6 June 2014 (UTC)
The ALT2a hook fact doesn't appear in the source cited (footnote 1). Yoninah (talk) 19:17, 9 June 2014 (UTC)
- The statement was very much part of the page when the ref was added, however, it seems to have been removed. In any case, I have added a Business Today link. So the issue has been sorted. --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 20:01, 10 June 2014 (UTC)
- Thanks SE, that does indeed spruce it up. Maury Markowitz (talk) 11:46, 6 June 2014 (UTC)
Thanks, but is it possible to not promote this to the Prep area for a few more hours? I have just managed to click a better picture of the Moto E, and I thought I'd upload that once my bandwidth is up in a few hours. --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 07:40, 11 June 2014 (UTC)
- Done. I've changed the image. This one looks better. Spruce it up if needed. Thanks. :) --Rsrikanth05 (talk) 18:45, 12 June 2014 (UTC)