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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 19:13, 24 September 2012 (UTC)

Muhammad al-Khuli

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Created/expanded by Al Ameer son (talk), Zozo2kx (talk). Nominated by Al Ameer son (talk) at 03:12, 15 September 2012 (UTC)

Long enough. Well sourced. Sourcing for the hook checks out. No copyvio. NPOV, neutral tone. Hook is a bit long but under 200 chars. I would have liked to see the word Syrian mentioned in the hook, though.
ALT1: "... that Muhammad al-Khuli was removed from his position as Syrian Air Force Intelligence chief by Hafez al-Assad due to international pressure regarding Khuli's alleged involvement in the Hindawi affair?
It's still under 200 characters. Hybernator (talk) 00:21, 24 September 2012 (UTC)
ALT1 is fine by me. Thanks for the review. --Al Ameer son (talk) 00:46, 24 September 2012 (UTC)
Good to go for ALT1. Hybernator (talk) 00:50, 24 September 2012 (UTC)
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