Template:Did you know nominations/Mural (Julie Mehretu)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Lightburst talk 15:43, 13 October 2023 (UTC)
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Mural (Julie Mehretu)
- ... that Julie Mehretu's Mural (2009), installed at 200 West Street in New York City, was painted using 215 different colors? Source: Harney, Elizabeth (2019). "Reimagining Global Modernity in the Age of Neo-Liberal Patronage: The History Paintings of Julie Mehretu". In Salber Phillips, Mark; Bear, Jordan (eds.). What Was History Painting and What Is It Now?. Montreal: McGill-Queen's University Press. pp. 249. ISBN 978-0-7735-5895-3.
- ALT1: ... that Julie Mehretu's Mural from 2009, commissioned by the American investment bank Goldman Sachs, was painted using 215 different colors? Source: Harney, Elizabeth (2019). "Reimagining Global Modernity in the Age of Neo-Liberal Patronage: The History Paintings of Julie Mehretu". In Salber Phillips, Mark; Bear, Jordan (eds.). What Was History Painting and What Is It Now?. Montreal: McGill-Queen's University Press. pp. 249. ISBN 978-0-7735-5895-3.
- ALT2: ... that an abstracted depiction of the Market Gate of Miletus from 2nd century AD was incorporated into Julie Mehretu's 2009 large-scale painting commission titled Mural? Source: Tomkins, Calvin (2010-03-22). "Big Art, Big Money". The New Yorker. ISSN 0028-792X. Retrieved 2023-09-13 (https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2010/03/29/big-art-big-money)
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- Comment: I am leaning toward the first two hooks as I think they are simpler and more effective. Thank you very much for reviewing this nomination.
Created by Ppt91 (talk). Self-nominated at 20:08, 20 September 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Mural (Julie Mehretu); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
- I will review this in the coming days! WatkynBassett (talk) 04:44, 26 September 2023 (UTC)
- The article was created on 14 September 2023 and nominated on the 20 September 2023 and is thus eligible.
- The article has over 1,500 characters of readable prose.
- The article is nicely sourced. I did a spot check on a few sources (mostly quotes) and they cover their sentences.
- The article is written in a neutral and non-promotional tone.
- Earwig picked up some quotes and very few phrases which I find unconcerning.
- Please confirm that you do not need a QPQ, because you have fewer then five nominations.
- Will review the hook this week! WatkynBassett (talk) 05:23, 26 September 2023 (UTC)
- The Original hook has the right length and is interesting, I like it better than the ALTs. I did not see 200 West Street in the source, but this is not a material issue as the source tells us that the painting is installed at the Goldman HQ which is located at this building; regarding the necessity of a citation inline I think it is sufficient if the content of the hook is contained in two individual sentences in the article, which are each cited.
- Conclusion: Thank you for the nice knowledge creation. As someone who has no real knowledge in the arts I think I learned a bit reading the article. I will approve the Original hook, if you confirm that no QPQ is needed because you have fewer than five nominations under your belt. WatkynBassett (talk) 19:16, 26 September 2023 (UTC) -- Missed to ping ... @Ppt91: WatkynBassett (talk) 19:15, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
- @Ppt91: Thank you for confirming that no QPQ is needed (for promoter: the confirmation is on the article's talk page). This nomination is good to go – I approve the original hook. WatkynBassett (talk) 06:47, 29 September 2023 (UTC)
- I was able to confirm ALT0 on Page 249 of the given source. I find it interesting. Lightburst (talk) 15:41, 13 October 2023 (UTC)