- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 06:01, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
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Naoki Saito
- ... that Naoki Saito is a contributing artist of the Pokémon Trading Card Game? Source: 4gamer (article): "ポケモンカードゲームのイラストを手がける，さいとうなおき氏のサイン会も行われた" [An autograph session for Naoki Saito, an illustrator for the Pokémon Trading Card Game, was also held.]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/KNUE
Created by Lullabying (talk). Self-nominated at 08:34, 15 August 2021 (UTC).
- Hi Lullabying, thanks for creating this article and bringing to DYK. It is new and long enough, having been nominated two days after creation and at 2411 characters of prose. All sentences have inline citations, and I'll AGF that the sources in Japanese confirm what is being said (I did use Google Translate where possible to make sure, though). My only note is that the information of the subject's date and place of birth are only source in the infobox, and my recomendation would be to add that to the "Personal life" section. Regarding the hook you submitted, I'd like to suggest a more hooky alternative:
- Alt0b: ... that manga artist and youtuber Naoki Saito is a contributing artist of both the Duel Masters Trading Card Game and the Pokémon Trading Card Game?
I'd like await the nominator to say if they are okay with the hook, and for them to finish their review of Template:Did you know nominations/KNUE, but everything else is good to go. Isabelle 🔔 15:02, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
- I'm not so sure about the hook proposed. Saito is better known for his illustrations and contributions to the card games instead of being a manga artist, so emphasis should go to his illustrating work. lullabying (talk) 22:51, 25 August 2021 (UTC)
- Hi lullabying! Would removing
manga artist and youtuber
make the suggestion acceptable? The subject's profession is not necessary, but I feel like having the two card games he worked with is more interesting. If that's okay with you, I can mark the DYK as done, otherwise, I'd ask you to either suggest an alternative hook or for a second opinion on the original one. Isabelle 🔔 01:07, 26 August 2021 (UTC)- That might be fine. lullabying (talk) 19:52, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks lullabying. I believe the following hook should suffice then:
- Alt0c: that Naoki Saito is a contributing artist of both the Duel Masters Trading Card Game and the Pokémon Trading Card Game?
With QPQ done, I've marked the DYK as good to go, assuming good faith on the sources, for hook Alt0c. Isabelle 🔔 20:55, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks lullabying. I believe the following hook should suffice then:
- That might be fine. lullabying (talk) 19:52, 28 August 2021 (UTC)
- Hi lullabying! Would removing
