Template:Did you know nominations/Neena Schwartz

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 13:15, 19 June 2015 (UTC)

Neena Schwartz

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  • ALT1:... that endocrinologist Neena Schwartz published a memoir about her career in science in which she first publicly came out as lesbian?
  • Reviewed: Het verboden rijk
  • Comment: Pride month theme. Is the first hook too negative? Too snarky for the main page, but what I want to say is "This hormone had been hypothesized for forty years but it took a gay woman to think of looking for it somewhere other than the testes."

Created by Opabinia regalis (talk). Self-nominated at 04:48, 6 June 2015 (UTC).

Interesting person with a life to tell, good sources, offline accepted AGF. Article: the lead should only contain a summary of referenced information from the body, needing refs only for quotations. The original hook is not "too negative" but I like the ALT better. Should appear this month! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:48, 15 June 2015 (UTC)