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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 20:42, 23 July 2020 (UTC)
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Nerine Barrett
- ... that Nerine Barrett, one of the few black women who have achieved international recognition as a classical pianist, first performed on Radio Jamaica for her third birthday? Source: "the list of black women pianists is a short one: Armenta Adams, Nerine Barrett," (Virtuosi: A Defense and a (Sometimes Erotic) Celebration of Great Pianists, pp. 88–89); "Nerine could already play the piano at the age of 2. Her musical lessons started soon after. In fact, she performed on Radio Jamaica on the eve of her third birthday." (Dictionary of Caribbean and Afro–Latin American Biography)
Created by SusunW (talk). Nominated by Yoninah (talk) at 23:40, 4 July 2020 (UTC).
Interesting life, on fine sources, subscription sources accepted AGF. I am not happy with the hook, find the explanation rather long, and the playing at age 3 rather sensational. Please try harder ;) - I made some minor copy-edits, hoping the edit summaries are clear enough. Still open: I hate to use the word "showmanship" for a woman, and the as the final word ;) - Also; I am not happy with the Mozart, - too general. If the NYT critic said nothing worth quoting, do we need to advertise his paper at all, and then have the other twice? Now this review was, specifically, for the mature K 503, played at The Proms conducted by Kempe, - that would lend more glamour to her than "The NYT"? How about a hook that N B from Jamaica was the soloist in that concerto at the Proms? (.. which everybody seems to know) - A while ago, we had Mr. Kempe's soprano wife on DYK, mentioning him also, DYK? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:18, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
- Please feel free to make any changes you want Gerda Arendt. I have very limited knowledge of music. I have never heard of the Proms and the names of the various pieces listed in the articles about her are unfamiliar. As for showmanship, I remind you of (Clara Schumann/Liszt). It is apparently a thing in classical music. It seems to me that a hook based on the fact that she is a black classical musician would draw in more viewers than simply listing a venue or a piece of music, but again, I am willing to leave it to others who have more knowledge of what viewers want. SusunW (talk) 15:19, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
- I also think the hook speaks to a wider audience than music fans. Yoninah (talk) 18:32, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
I can approve the hook, sure, just think the third birthday thing makes her just another child prodigy, not a serious musician as the Guardian review suggests she was. The word "showmanship" doesn't appear in Clara Schumann's article, - how about "display of virtuosity" instead? ... and please not at the end what she does not. The Guardian quote would be a good way to end. Do we have the New York Times review? ... because if not we could simply drop it. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:01, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
- I also think the hook speaks to a wider audience than music fans. Yoninah (talk) 18:32, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
- Please feel free to make any changes you want Gerda Arendt. I have very limited knowledge of music. I have never heard of the Proms and the names of the various pieces listed in the articles about her are unfamiliar. As for showmanship, I remind you of (Clara Schumann/Liszt). It is apparently a thing in classical music. It seems to me that a hook based on the fact that she is a black classical musician would draw in more viewers than simply listing a venue or a piece of music, but again, I am willing to leave it to others who have more knowledge of what viewers want. SusunW (talk) 15:19, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
