- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:23, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
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Nicki McNelly
edit- ... that Nicki McNelly had various jobs, including serving in the British Army and working as a school secretary, before being ordained in the Scottish Episcopal Church?
- ALT1:... that Nicki McNelly joined the Intelligence Corps of the British Army after leaving school but was forced to leave in order to marry?
- ALT2:... that Nicki McNelly, who spent most of working life as an army wife, would later become Provost of an Episcopal cathedral?
Created by Gaia Octavia Agrippa (talk). Self-nominated at 19:17, 30 November 2017 (UTC).
Article is new enough, long enough and no copyvios. I like ALT1 the best, but I'm not exactly sure where the source says she was forced to leave the Intelligence Corps (as opposed to leaving of her own free will) - can you pull out the specific quote from the source that backs this up? Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 11:01, 2 December 2017 (UTC)
- I suppose "forced" is a bit too strong. The way I read it, if she wanted to marry, she had to leave the army. She chose to get married but that meant she was forced/required/compelled. Marriage was a choice, but leaving the army wasn't. We could change forced to had, but it doesn't quite have the same ring to it. Gaia Octavia Agrippa Talk 17:34, 2 December 2017 (UTC)
Okay, well let's go with ALT2 which a bit less controversial and fully verifiable to the Diocese of Argyll and The Isles. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 19:39, 2 December 2017 (UTC)
- I suppose "forced" is a bit too strong. The way I read it, if she wanted to marry, she had to leave the army. She chose to get married but that meant she was forced/required/compelled. Marriage was a choice, but leaving the army wasn't. We could change forced to had, but it doesn't quite have the same ring to it. Gaia Octavia Agrippa Talk 17:34, 2 December 2017 (UTC)
