Template:Did you know nominations/Niki Reiser

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The result was: promoted by Orlady (talk) 01:27, 10 August 2012 (UTC)

Niki Reiser

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Created/expanded by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 22:02, 29 July 2012 (UTC)

  • Long enough, new enough, notable enough, nicely written. Hook adequately referenced. One minor suggestion I'd make is to change to the hook for readability (i.e. one central clause per sentence vs. 2):