- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 11:48, 4 November 2019 (UTC)
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Nischal Basnet
- ... that the Nepali film director Nischal Basnet went to Australia to study 3D animation however he studied hospitality course and eventually became a chef? Source:The Nepali Man
- Reviewed: Warwick Road, Earl's Court
5x expanded by CAPTAIN MEDUSA (talk). Self-nominated at 11:59, 19 October 2019 (UTC).
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- New - Meets criteria.
- Long enough - Easily meets criteria.
- Cited hook - Hook is indeed cited. However, I don't like the wording, or at least the way the two parts are merged. I'd reword to something like
.. that the Nepali film director Nischal Basnet went to Australia to study 3D animation but ultimately studied hospitality and became a chef?
- Within policy - Article seems to meet BLP
- QPQ - Met.
- Other comments - One thing I'm definitely not comfortable with is the prose. I think this needs a copyedit to meet basic prose standards; there are some glaring formatting and prose errors I noticed.
- I'm going to put this on hold until an uninvolved party can correct some of the more glaring prose errors - other than that, this is a good piece for DYK.
Toa Nidhiki05 00:54, 21 October 2019 (UTC)
- Toa Nidhiki05, It has been copyedited. Thank you for the review. ___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk (We are the champions, my friends) 13:21, 21 October 2019 (UTC)
