Template:Did you know nominations/Norwich War Memorial

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 15:41, 20 February 2016 (UTC)

Norwich War Memorial

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Norwich War Memorial

* ... that Norwich War Memorial (pictured) was unveiled in 1927, relocated in 1938, and rotated in the 21st century?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Spiro Crne

Created by HJ Mitchell (talk). Self-nominated at 02:25, 7 February 2016 (UTC).

Created on February 6, is long enough, and is neutral. Hook is within length limit and is definitely interested (I haven't ever heard of a memorial being moved, and then separately being rotated), but I think it can be worded a bit differently (see below). QPQ done; Image is fair used, used in the article, and looks fine small.

ALT 1: ... that the Norwich War Memorial (pictured), which was unveiled in 1927, was relocated in 1938, and then rotated in the 21st century?

Let me know your thoughts on the alternate I proposed. I think it sounds and flows a little bit better. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 18:01, 11 February 2016 (UTC)

Alt 1 is fine with me. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 18:37, 11 February 2016 (UTC)

with ALT 1 hook. Good job! - Favre1fan93 (talk) 18:43, 11 February 2016 (UTC)