Template:Did you know nominations/Of Mist, and Grass, and Sand

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The result was: promoted by DannyS712 (talk) 14:26, 1 June 2020 (UTC)

Of Mist, and Grass, and Sand

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... that Vonda McIntyre's 1973 short story "Of Mist, and Grass, and Sand" was described as a high point in fictional depictions of the relationship between humans and snakes?
- ALT1:... that Vonda McIntyre's 1973 short story "Of Mist, and Grass, and Sand", which won a Nebula Award, was used as the first chapter of her 1978 novel Dreamsnake, which also won a Nebula Award?

Reviewed: Gregory Gordon

Moved to mainspace by Vanamonde93 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:51, 14 May 2020 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy compliance:

Adequate sourcing:
Neutral:
Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
Other problems: - There are some broken citations to McIntyre 1973. I assume that this refers to the story, but they should be repaired so it's clear.

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: I think ALT0 is better but both work b uidhe 04:24, 14 May 2020 (UTC)

@Buidhe: Apologies, dammit... Someone mucked around with the harv errors script, and then someone offered a fix, and it seems like the cure was worse than the disease because the script is supposed to catch these and no longer does. Should be good now...and I'm off to see if there's another script that works better. Vanamonde (Talk) 04:39, 14 May 2020 (UTC)