Template:Did you know nominations/Olaf Guthfrithson

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 08:01, 17 May 2016 (UTC)

Olaf Guthfrithson

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... that a skeleton found at Auldhame in 2005 may belong to Olaf Guthfrithson?

Reviewed: Shaphee Lanphee

5x expanded by Retroplum (talk). Self-nominated at 17:06, 14 May 2016 (UTC).

Very nice article, solid expansion and a good fact. I think the hook itself could be improved by hinting at who he was: "to Olaf Guthfrithson, king of Dublin and Northumbria" or something similar. What do you think? Josh Milburn (talk) 19:25, 15 May 2016 (UTC)

@J Milburn: Yes that could be good. How about this:

ALT1:... that a skeleton found at Auldhame in 2005 may belong to Olaf Guthfrithson, king of Dublin and Northumbria?

I think that makes it a bit clearer. Retroplum (talk) 19:56, 15 May 2016 (UTC)

Great; good to go. A spotcheck reveals no issues. Josh Milburn (talk) 19:20, 16 May 2016 (UTC)