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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:20, 10 January 2017 (UTC)
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Olav Bergersen
edit... that naval officer and MP Olav Bergersen (pictured) wrote several books on the 18th century war hero Tordenskiold?Source: "Skrevet (...) Viceadmiral Tordenskiold 1925. Tordenskiold og danskene 1932, (...) Red. «Tordenskiolds Brev» 1964. (...), Tragedien omkring Tordenskiolds død 1963."[1]- ALT1:
... that Olav Bergersen (pictured) wrote several books about Tordenskiold?
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- ALT2: ... that naval officer and MP Olav Bergersen (pictured) wrote several books on the 18th century vice admiral Tordenskiold?
- Reviewed: Libyan jird (second of three)
Created by Oceanh (talk). Self-nominated at 14:26, 4 December 2016 (UTC).
- Interesting life on few but good sources, all Norwegian, accepted AGF. Please link Tordenskiold the first time, not the second, and add the reference to the sentence where the fact is mentioned. So far we don't have the "war hero" in the article. Do you want to to change that? ALT1 would work without it, but is less interesting. The image is nice and licensed, but doesn't show much in small size. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:49, 4 December 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review. Sorry for late response, I have been busy and away from home for some period. I find that Tordenskiold is called sjøhelt/søehelt/ (in Norwegian/Danish) ("sea hero?") in some sources, but as long as his accomplishments are not detailed in Bergersen's biography, it is maybe more objective to use the title vice admiral? See the proposed Alt2. Oceanh (talk) 23:00, 7 January 2017 (UTC)
- thank you, feel the same --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:24, 7 January 2017 (UTC)