Template:Did you know nominations/Orissa Ikat

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The result was: promoted by Jolly Ω Janner 09:38, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Orissa Ikat

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Orissa Ikat from Sambalpur
Orissa Ikat from Sambalpur
  • ... that in the Orissa Ikat (pictured) or "Bandha of Orissa," a unique method of adopting warp and weft threads by tie-dyed process is termed as "poetry on the loom"?

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 01:42, 31 January 2016 (UTC).

  • General eligibility:
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: "Orissa Ikat, geographically tagged, of Orissa now renamed as Odisha[1] is also known as "Bandha of Orissa" for the unique method used in its design and development." - What on earth is that sentence trying to say? I cannot understand it.

My other problem is that the hook is not cited. --3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 02:29, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

  • 3family6 Thanks for the review. Sorry about the sentence. A full stop and a word was missing. I have corrected it now. I have also fixed an additional reference related to the hook text in the article. Nvvchar. 12:33, 1 March 2016 (UTC)
  • Nvvchar: The hook issue is resolved, thank you. However, "Orissa Ikat, geographically tagged, of Orissa now renamed as Odisha." is not a complete sentence.--3family6 (Talk to me | See what I have done) 01:30, 2 March 2016 (UTC)