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The result was: rejected by —♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 06:12, 28 April 2013 (UTC).
No work has been done on the suggestions for days on end.

Paracrine signalling

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5x expanded by Jeenah92 (talk), Developmentalbio (talk). Nominated by Smallman12q (talk) at 22:17, 5 April 2013 (UTC).

  • The section headers need to be decapitalized, more inline citations are needed (not every paragraph has them yet). And I think the hook needs to be redone. Currently, it says "through" twice. I have a feeling it can be phrased more elegantly.—♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 19:38, 23 April 2013 (UTC)