Template:Did you know nominations/People's Liberation Guerrilla Army (India)
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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 12:30, 13 October 2013 (UTC)
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People's Liberation Guerrilla Army (India)
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- ... that the People's Liberation Guerrilla Army, the armed wing of the Communist Party of India (Maoist), has 45 percent of women cadres?
Created/expanded by Gfosankar (talk). Self nominated at 14:39, 1 September 2013 (UTC).
- Comment: I copyedited the article for grammar and style. For grammar purposes, I would suggest an ALT1: ... that the People's Liberation Guerrilla Army, the armed wing of the Communist Party of India (Maoist), is 45 percent female? Also, what is meant by the "banned organisation" statement in the lead? This isn't really explained or sourced in the body. EricEnfermero Howdy! 05:51, 7 September 2013 (UTC)
The article seems to satisfy the requirements of date, length and policy. The ALT1 hook is better grammatically and satisfies the requirements of hook length and interest. The article still needs more polish and expansion but seems good enough to be put up at DYK, where it may then get this attention. The issue of being banned seems fairly obvious as this is a revolutionary army conducting a civil war. Warden (talk) 14:02, 12 October 2013 (UTC)
