- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 23:30, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
Percy Delf Smith
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that Percy Delf Smith's artwork included pictures inspired by his experiences in the First World War trenches and lettering in Roman capitals? Source: Experiences in the First World War: Imperial War Museum, lettering: Nash "Smith’s first published Roman capitals...headed ‘Pen-made Roman capitals founded on second-century incised inscriptions", Delf Smith's book Lettering: a Handbook of Modern Alphabets, page 2, Roman capitals have "content and atmosphere, and good examples convey a sense of stability and satisfaction" (Google Books has snippet view to verify this quote)
Created by Blythwood (talk). Self-nominated at 01:22, 26 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Percy Delf Smith; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Approved. Article is new enough and long enough, no eligibility issues, QPQ done. Hook is interesting and cited, article has no major problems or concerns. ––FormalDude (talk) 14:03, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
- FormalDude, great, thanks! One minor change I've made, I've come to feel that since a lot of his pictures were imaginative based on his wartime experiences (e.g. the dance of death series) it was better to change it from "of his experiences" to "inspired by his experiences". Hope that's OK, let me know if that's a problem. Blythwood (talk) 17:09, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
- Sounds good to me! ––FormalDude (talk) 00:31, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
- @Blythwood: On second thought, your reword has made me notice some potential confusion. Right now it could be read as his pictures are inspired by his experiences with lettering in Roman capitals, whereas I took your intended meaning to be that his pictures include lettering in Roman capitals. Similar problem with the original wording too. Luckily I think it's an easy fix by changing it to something like "... that Percy Delf Smith's artwork included pictures inspired by his experiences in the First World War trenches and pictures of lettering in Roman capitals?". Though it may be best to not combine the two at all, and just choose to mention the WW1 inspired pictures as that seems likely to be the more interesting of the two. Let me know what you think. ––FormalDude (talk) 02:43, 6 September 2023 (UTC)
- FormalDude, that's fair. I've reordered it to more clearly separate the two points (when I said lettering I meant what we'd now call graphic design, as in he'd design you a memorial plaque or clockface, rather than what we'd consider fine art). And added a lot more pictures to clarify. Blythwood (talk)
- Thanks. ALT1 looks good. ––FormalDude (talk) 02:13, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
- Great! Blythwood (talk) 21:59, 7 September 2023 (UTC)
Approved. Article is new enough and long enough, no eligibility issues, QPQ done. Hook is interesting and cited, article has no major problems or concerns. ––FormalDude (talk) 14:03, 5 September 2023 (UTC)