- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 04:08, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
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Perry Askam
edit... that as a young orphan, future actor and singer Perry Askam moved into the Rengstorff House with his maternal aunt?Source: Butler, p. 38
- ALT1: ... that Perry Askam was the only professional singer in the Hollywood musical Sweet Kitty Bellairs? Source: Bradley p. 196
- Reviewed: Jolly Roger Records
- Comment: moved from draft to article space 17:57, 27 November 2017
Created by 78.26 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:21, 28 November 2017 (UTC).
Interesting life, on good source, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. Unless you want to promote the house, I like ALT1 better. - Article: I don't know how to understand "Elisa and Perry were soon to move ...", complicated tense, and soon compared to what? - Please say "baritone" somewhere (and in the ibox) for those who don't know operatic roles that well. I added the opera composers. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:26, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: I attempted to make the two modifications to the article per your suggestions. Does that rectify the issue? Thanks! 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 17:03, 4 December 2017 (UTC)
yes, thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:32, 4 December 2017 (UTC)
- @Gerda Arendt: I attempted to make the two modifications to the article per your suggestions. Does that rectify the issue? Thanks! 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 17:03, 4 December 2017 (UTC)
