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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 06:53, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
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Pixie Davies
- ... that although Pixie Davies has been performing in films since 2012, her breakout role came in Disney's Mary Poppins Returns in 2018? Source: [1]
- ALT1:... that regarding her performance in Out of the Dark, RogerEbert.com said 7-year-old Pixie Davies "is cute enough, she understandably doesn't have much range beyond pouting, and smiling"? Source: [2]
5x expanded by Pamzeis (talk). Self-nominated at 05:57, 12 August 2021 (UTC).
Hi Pamzeis, review follows: more than 5x expansion in text confirmed on 12 August; sources look reliable for the field; I didn't find any overly close paraphrasing from the sources used and the quotes are properly attributed; hooks are OK, mentioned in the article and check out to the cited sources; a QPQ has been carried out; a few queries - Dumelow (talk) 07:08, 12 August 2021 (UTC)
- Is it worth linking Breakthrough role in the hook, I must admit I had to look it up
Done
- Is it worth mentioning her age in ALT1 to explain why her range was considered short?
Added
- That fact that Nativity 2 was her film debut is mentioned in the lead but not in the main text
- Added to the main text
- You'll need to add citations for the roles in the filmography table that don't have them (you could reuse the ones from the main text)
