Template:Did you know nominations/Pravina Mehta

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 10:04, 12 October 2015 (UTC)

Pravina Mehta

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Navi Mumbai skyline

... that Pravina Mehta's most notable contribution in the field of architecture remains the conceptualization and proposal in 1965 of the New Bombay plan (pictured) along with Charles Correa and Shirish Patel?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Suhayya Abu-Hakima

5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk) and Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Nvvchar (talk) at 11:46, 17 September 2015 (UTC).

Ada Lovelace Day is October 13th and this one might be relevant. Please consider helping move articles Victuallers (talk) 23:40, 10 October 2015 (UTC)

New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Image is pd. The hook fact, however, seems to be the page creator's own view, as none of the sources cite it as her "most notable contribution". Yoninah (talk) 11:29, 11 October 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, @Yoninah. I've c/e the article to remove that viewpoint and offer ALT1: ~~... that Pravina Mehta was involved in the conceptualization and proposal of the New Bombay plan (pictured) in 1964 in collaboration with Charles Correa and Shirish Patel?~~ --Rosiestep (talk) 14:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)

Thank you. The hook, though, is a little dry. What do you think about:
ALT2: ... that the vision of architects Pravina Mehta, Charles Correa, and Shirish Patel for the New Bombay project (pictured) has been compared to that of a popular Bollywood film? Yoninah (talk) 16:40, 11 October 2015 (UTC)

@Yoninah: well, I love ALT2! --Rosiestep (talk) 19:05, 11 October 2015 (UTC)

Thank you. Calling for another review to sign off on ALT2. Yoninah (talk) 19:29, 11 October 2015 (UTC)

Hook fact in Alt2 checks out to online reliable source. GTG in light of the rest of the checks above. Could still make Ada Lovelace Day! Victuallers (talk) 09:50, 12 October 2015 (UTC)