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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:33, 2 June 2014 (UTC)

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Propaganda, Excellent (album), Crimson Cord

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Created by HotHat (talk), 3family6 (talk). Nominated by 3family6 (talk) at 02:16, 13 May 2014 (UTC).

  • In Propaganda "his second album, Listen Watch Focus, also came out in 2008 through End of Earth Records. Petty's next three albums were all released through the Portland-based Humble Beast Records. The first, entitled Art Ambidextrous, was recorded as a dual-album with Odd Thomas, and came out on February 1, 2011. Petty's first solo album on the label, Excellent, came out in 2012, and charted at No. 7 on the Billboard Top Gospel chart.[8] Petty's fourth solo album, Crimson Cord came out on April 29, 2014, and also charted successfully.[9]" is confusing. It seems that Listen Watch Focus was 2nd, Art Ambidextrous was 3rd, Excellent was 4th and Crimson Cord was 5th, but the text says it was 4th.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 08:44, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
  • O.K. you need to cite the album release date to really source the hook and the information in the LEADs should be in the main body. I'd prefer if you sourced all the facts in the main body rather than the LEAD.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:51, 24 May 2014 (UTC)

@TonyTheTiger: Done. I apologize for not addressing this sooner, I must have missed it on my watchlist.--¿3family6 contribs 23:57, 30 May 2014 (UTC)

  • The public speaker claim is only in the LEAD and not in the main body.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 04:22, 31 May 2014 (UTC)
    I removed the public speaker bit, as this overlaps with Prop's poetry and spoken word. I added info on music videos to Excellent and Crimson Cord, which should satisfy length issues.--¿3family6 contribs 16:01, 31 May 2014 (UTC)
  • This article is now all set. It is adequate for DYK standards although several sections could really use more content for higher levels of merit. It is neutral with proper citation and paraphrasing.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 07:56, 1 June 2014 (UTC)
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