- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:13, 8 February 2020 (UTC)
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Putte Nelsson
Putte Nelsson
- ... that pianist Putte Nelsson (pictured) has backed up Ricky Martin, Mariah Carey and Mary J. Blige? Source: Source:[1]
- ALT1 ... that pianist Putte Nelsson (pictured) has backed up Ricky Martin and Mariah Carey?
- Reviewed: Art of the 2019 Hong Kong protests
Created by BabbaQ (talk). Self-nominated at 23:54, 20 December 2019 (UTC).
long enough, new enough, Aftonbladet verifies hook, so that's all good. Thing is, the hook is a bit wordy. Can you condense that whole "played...such as" to "backed up"? That lead is still a bit pedestrian (why is it so noteworthy that he backed them up? Isn't that what musicians do?), but it's shorter and shorter is better. Drmies (talk) 03:43, 29 December 2019 (UTC)
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Length, history and references verified. Passes copyvio check. Next time you write an article where every source is in a foreign language (or any source for that matter), remember to use the "lang=XX" parameter in the citation template. Daniel Case (talk) 20:03, 21 January 2020 (UTC)
- BabbaQ - came by to promote this hook, but the source doesn't mention Blige (unless it's by a different name). Is this suitably hooky? Sounds more like something that someone who was successful might do. I'd be more inclined if we simply included the former two. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 17:11, 23 January 2020 (UTC)
- Lee Vilenski - I fixed a Alt hook. Take a look.BabbaQ (talk) 19:14, 23 January 2020 (UTC)
- Sorry for the wait Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 15:30, 7 February 2020 (UTC)
- Sorry for the wait
- Lee Vilenski - I fixed a Alt hook. Take a look.BabbaQ (talk) 19:14, 23 January 2020 (UTC)
