Template:Did you know nominations/Ralph Waldo Swetman

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The result was: promoted by sst✈^(conjugate) 04:03, 9 February 2016 (UTC)

Ralph Waldo Swetman

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... that Ralph Waldo Swetman confronted falling enrollment at Oswego State Teachers College by luring an Air Corps unit to the school?

Reviewed: Tourism in Burundi

Created by Raymie (talk). Self-nominated at 04:58, 11 January 2016 (UTC).

New enough at the time of the nomination, never featured on the Main Page, and is long enough. The hook is referenced in the article and cited correctly. There are no dispute templates and a copyright violation is unlikely per Earwig's Copyvio Detector. Hook is properly formatted and short enough. QPQ completed. Great job. Z1720 (talk) 02:36, 7 February 2016 (UTC)

I have a concern with the article. The following sentences starting with "He did so by bypassing the state government..." are not cited inline. Whilst this wouldn't normally be a problem for DYK? criteria, they expand upon the hook fact. It's quite likely anyone reading this hook will want to find more information about it. Jolly Ω Janner 05:12, 7 February 2016 (UTC)

It's the next sentence from the Counts source, but I've included an inline citation there anyway. Raymie (t • c) 05:21, 7 February 2016 (UTC)

That's better. I think we'll have to wait for another promoter to come along for this one now. Jolly Ω Janner 05:27, 7 February 2016 (UTC)